I’m writing a realistic historical fiction story from the 1930s to the 1950s set in Oklahoma. I’ve read some historical fiction and there’s a reoccurring theme of it’s the 70s so we love the Fonz and say groovy. It’s kinda cringe and feels lazy or even nostalgic bait at times. It’s like having a story set place today and people’s personalities are just liking popular things. I do want to include pop culture from that era but not have it come off as oh it’s the 50s and those kids sure love their cowboy movies. How would I make it come off as natural and not as bait? A main theme of my book is nostalgia is only surface level.

  • It's partly a matter of becoming familiar with the way different people spoke during the period and knowing the difference between people who speak naturally and the ones who were putting extra work into being slicker than an icy road on bald tires. There was never a time when people who insisted on talking like Beatniks or Bolsheviks didn't cause a lot of eye-rolling. It's authentic for their utterances to be cringe.

    Some of it goes in and out of fashion very quickly, while others hang around for generations. WW II G. I. slang was especially durable because it was common to a huge swath of people, while slang associated with fad, fashions, and movements tends to fade almost as soon as they do.

    The Hollywood movies and pulp fiction written at the time are a pretty good start. They're not really representative, but at least they're contemporary, and they're what readers will compare your own efforts to unless they're especially old or well-read.