P.S: Not a power fantasy! Just want opinions on how the enticing story is if at all and if the writing is jarring at all.

Synopsis: A listless teenager, Alphael, finds his boring life shattered when he is inexplicably a victim of the “Binding” and is sent into a brutal new world. He’s forced to survive in a world where giant masked beasts hunt the inhabitants incessantly. Alphael must build himself anew and find the will to fight if he ever hopes to see his mother again.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jPdlWkeXNob6xbK77O_MxBrwRlk6U4oJqRcxMjJOtVk/edit?usp=drivesdk