Hiya! I'm looking for feedback on my short story, 550~ words, as I get ready to port it into video-form in the coming months!
I have a multimedia version, as well as a google docs, incase you just want to read it.
(there are some minor discrepancies for pacing between the two, but most of the content is the same)
I'd like feedback moreso on pacing, characterization, etc rather than grammar, but any is appreciated! (and if you'd like to comment on the presentation of the multimedia version/flow, feel free to!)
https://www.carruweal.com/blackcat
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13AYgyhcIboziygjq7qSweHqD_D-10GLAfr8R9E4IJrQ/edit?usp=sharing
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So, I lost interest in the text very quickly, but the multimedia version was actually very nice! Didn't know it could make such a big difference. But I am not the intended audience for your work, so take this with a grain of salt and best of luck!
Thanks for your time! : D
No problem at all. I really enjoyed the one that is on your website, so it was worth it!
Dope art, story, and concept.