Don't make connecting lines for letters that don't have them. I mean lowercase в, и, й, к, н, п, р , с, т, у, ш, щ, ю. What you're portraying has nothing to do with reality. connecting lines in Russian are distributed differently.
the loop is too big for Цц
Size is wrong. "body" of all letters except capital has the same size. The capital letters are about 2 times higher, б and в are about 2 times higher up, у, з, р, ф and д are about 2 times lower down. в, у, д, з have visible loops, р, ф have sticks. б have hook. щ, ц have tiny loop
You're connecting о and б incorrectly. б, о, в (and originally ю, ф) have the same lower connection, which is not look like the separate element, but a continue of it's circle, like if you're drawing с. о, в (and in some handwriting ф, ю, not б!) have upper connection which is small loop on the top and for letters that start at the top (never for л, м, я). in the word "яблоко" you essentially lose a piece of л and because of the (beautiful, but unnecessary) step you get бч instead of бл
The main problem here is this way of using cursive defeats the whole purpose of cursive. It's pretty from the first look, but will save you less time than just writing with typeface letters. Thankfully cursive is taught universally and has countless material for it, so you have places to learn how to cursive (also л is really weird because of that roof you're giving it that seems like trying to write it in a typeface fashion lol)
But what I'm saying is, while your handwriting looks pretty neat, I don't imagine you'd love using it when it's relatively awkward to write
i’m sure i’ll be okay once i practice more; this is how i want to write when i’m writing russian anyway, my writing in english is quite messy and so learning to write with a new alphabet can give me a fresh palette
Honestly the handwriting looks satisfying but I really can't swallow the л, it's like a groove that my eyes bump over every time LOL but yes, by all means have fun, the only reason people are criticising is because they are being prompted to, otherwise I doubt anyone would pay much attention to it (especially because most natives write like chickens anyways)
Don't make connecting lines for letters that don't have them. I mean lowercase в, и, й, к, н, п, р , с, т, у, ш, щ, ю. What you're portraying has nothing to do with reality. connecting lines in Russian are distributed differently.
the loop is too big for Цц
Size is wrong. "body" of all letters except capital has the same size. The capital letters are about 2 times higher, б and в are about 2 times higher up, у, з, р, ф and д are about 2 times lower down. в, у, д, з have visible loops, р, ф have sticks. б have hook. щ, ц have tiny loop
You're connecting о and б incorrectly. б, о, в (and originally ю, ф) have the same lower connection, which is not look like the separate element, but a continue of it's circle, like if you're drawing с. о, в (and in some handwriting ф, ю, not б!) have upper connection which is small loop on the top and for letters that start at the top (never for л, м, я). in the word "яблоко" you essentially lose a piece of л and because of the (beautiful, but unnecessary) step you get бч instead of бл
here you will find both connection options https://preview.redd.it/%D1%80%D1%83%D1%81%D1%81%D0%BA%D0%B8%D0%B9-%D1%8F%D0%B7%D1%8B%D0%BA-v0-0cv99yeoi49g1.png?width=2475&format=png&auto=webp&s=8d592af00637fb7af6e949cfc9ece7ac10d4856d
There are spelling mistakes too (few)
Please, use good прописи for practicing
thank you so much it’s very helpful
You're welcome!
Here's pictures with acceptable Russian cursive alphabet (3 in my comment)
https://www.reddit.com/r/russian/comments/1p4307i/comment/nq924wf/?context=3&utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button
And here you'll find more examples of my handwriting (it's not like in propisi, but it's "live")
https://www.reddit.com/r/russian/comments/1q41dct/comment/nxpju6x/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button
https://www.reddit.com/r/russian/comments/1q41dct/comment/nxrcnsw/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button
In uppercase T, the middle leg? is supposed to be straight
lowercase В is supposed to be a whole line high
thank you i will try again
Looks good but not "вашЕ дети", it's "вашИ дети"
https://preview.redd.it/a9j8e0dt4ccg1.jpeg?width=1633&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=81436c7c7361e146446c888c377c01d1f19acb4b
Catch the best way to write letters "Лл" and "Вв" My handwriting isn't good, but i'm native. Use it.
Isn't that how it's written?
Yes, it is supposed to be written that way
The main problem here is this way of using cursive defeats the whole purpose of cursive. It's pretty from the first look, but will save you less time than just writing with typeface letters. Thankfully cursive is taught universally and has countless material for it, so you have places to learn how to cursive (also л is really weird because of that roof you're giving it that seems like trying to write it in a typeface fashion lol)
But what I'm saying is, while your handwriting looks pretty neat, I don't imagine you'd love using it when it's relatively awkward to write
i’m sure i’ll be okay once i practice more; this is how i want to write when i’m writing russian anyway, my writing in english is quite messy and so learning to write with a new alphabet can give me a fresh palette
Honestly the handwriting looks satisfying but I really can't swallow the л, it's like a groove that my eyes bump over every time LOL but yes, by all means have fun, the only reason people are criticising is because they are being prompted to, otherwise I doubt anyone would pay much attention to it (especially because most natives write like chickens anyways)
You are doing great job 💯
I like your handwriting a lot. Good job
You already write better than 99.9% doctors in Russia