[0 YoE, Recent Graduate, Tech Sales / SDR / BDR, United Kingdom]

Targeting SDR / BDR / commercial roles. Econ grad, 4 months in a large global tech company doing B2B consultative sales + pipeline management. Not getting the traction I expected.

What’s wrong with this resume? What would you cut or rewrite?

2 points DorianGraysPassport

Be consistent with saying UK OR United Kingdom, don’t flip flop between one and the other. Say which exact four months you worked at the place, four months in 2025 breaks the established date format. I am impressed by your languages, if I were you, I’d feature them more prominently. Don’t use any action verbs more than once, and don’t use weak ones like assisted

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3 points Calm_Butterscotch386

Yeah mate this is just anonymised so I took out locations (included city) and dates just to be safe, I did that in a hurry so the formatting is a bit all over the place, but in my real cv it follows the same format as the first line about uni.

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1 points DorianGraysPassport

Ok good luck soldier

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1 points Calm_Butterscotch386

Thanks for all the advice!

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1 points DorianGraysPassport

It’s my job

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1 points fredwhoisflatulent

Work rights status unclear- looks like you are international so need sponsorship

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1 points Calm_Butterscotch386

Yes you are correct I will update the post now. How could you tell btw?

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1 points fredwhoisflatulent

IB is very rare in UK

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1 points Calm_Butterscotch386

Fair haha

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