So to keep things short. I’m a 31M. Residing in NJ. After 11 years in the workforce I finally found a job I could tolerate and finally got a small promotion to 24.50 just to be fired 6 months later. I managed to get a quick fill in as an operator for 23.50 to quickly find out I absolutely cannot figure this job out at all as to me it borderlines rocket science but will pretend ALAP for the income. What can I possibly pursue or even try to do at this point anymore I’m assuming not much or to just give up as I kinda already have after 8 years at another job to go NOWHERE according to my peers advice. Fortunately my spouse is a high income earner but would be nice to even make 1/3 what she does. A little reluctant to post here but hopefully some of you have realistic advice that aren’t just buzzwords and pull up by the bootstrap comments. Attached my resume for reference. Thankyou for taking the time to read

Halve the number of skills at the bottom and merge them with the summary section. Simplify them to as few words as possible "Willing to work outdoors and on any shift" can simply be "outdoor work". whoever is reviewing the resume needs to get the gist of your skills in just seconds. The work experience section is where more time can be spent reading. Remove redundant points and things that are often asked during applications "Able to lift heavy objects" and "physically fit" are essentially the same thing, and heavy lifting prerequisites are often asked when applying. Same thing for the driver's license.
looking it over, I'd simplify your skills to the following:
I'd also consider adding bullet points to the work experience section as well. This can make the resume look less wordy and more focused even if you haven't removed any information.
"Responsible for preparing and mixing drug formulations, weighing and processing raw materials according to standard operating procedures, operating and maintaining laboratory equipment, documenting procedures, and ensuring that all work complies with current Good Manufacturing Practices and regulatory standards."
Becomes:
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Thankyou I will correct these granted I did not write it mine was much much worse lol luckily after getting it updated to this has helped substantially so will make those corrections to make it better thankyou!!
it needs work.
every recruiter/HM has different preferences so take mine suggestions with a grain of salt.
i don't like the job summary at all.
'authorized to work...' doesn't belong in the summary.
if you are going to freely offer the info i would get a little more specific ie US Citizen or Perm Resident and put that info under your name at the top of the page.
i prefer more specific details and numbers in a resume you have a sales job with no real info.
skills section- i want some of these detail in the job descriptions.
I have no meaningful advice. Sorry.
Your resume looks like mine in terms of terminology and whatnot. This is seriously a shitty time to be in the "in-between" experience wise. You have to prove that you know what youre working with but theres SO MUCH of it that you dont even know what to do with it.
I work in QA. Being a pest control technician is a minor role in my position. How the hell are we supposed to get this across on 1 or 2 pages?
What i highly suggest is breaking this up into bullet points. Youd have to eliminate a lot of text though. Figure out what responsibilities had a larger impact. Quantify your result (somehow. I dont know how anyone does this without having access to sensitive information.)
Try to figure out a less wordy way of displaying the information. Maybe doing skills down one side and making the descriptions only go half way across the page.
A resume should be easy to skim this feels like i have to fully read it.
That's an awful resume
This is the resume behind 50% of redditors complaining they applied to 300 jobs and got zero interviews but it's definitely totally not their resume because they had their cousin read it.
BTW OP no hate to you, I think it's awesome you're soliciting feedback. I hope you land something soon!
Didn’t take it as such Thankyou! I had pro help writing this one because the one I had prior was much much worse
Not sure what you are looking gor, but i have a friend in the IUPAT District Council 21 in NJ and they are recruiting alot of people for the union. You might have to take a financial step back but they have a good career plan. When I see good resumes that don't get picked at my job I have been steering them to this place. They have a office in Union, NJ. Don't know how bad of a drive that is for you though.
Just a few trivial things that stick out to me.. dates are not aligned under work experience You use both ‘-‘ and ‘to’ between dates. Pest control tech is written like you still work there (present tense). I read your summary and I have absolutely no idea what you mean by novel career path.
I’d be tempted to bullet point your duties at your job. Help them stand out more.
When focusing on niche skillsets, broaden it with more expected key words for example you talk about mixing chemicals etc, try to thread in words like “compliance” and “audit”. Complies can be missed.
I’d look at focusing on the positive impact or skillset that each responsibility demonstrates and front load that for each of your bullets.
Your pest control technician section is present tense and it should be past tense.
Sales associate and various vendors statement is closing the door on a lot of sales roles as they’ll be looking for similar items and client relationships or product knowledge
A bit left field but perhaps log the industries you’re experienced in up top to show the employer the wide scope of your experience (based on how open your CV is).
Sorry this is my third comment.
If your spouse is on a high income, could you study? I would look into project management in construction courses. You’d be surprised the types of roles in construction. You’d be surprised at the amount of adult learners on those courses.
A US construction project management degree, often a Bachelor of Science in Construction Management (BSCM) or similar, prepares you for leadership roles by blending business acumen, technical skills, and safety knowledge to oversee projects from start to finish, leading to careers as a Construction Manager, Project Engineer, or Coordinator, with high demand and good earning potential.
Random thread I found with opinions on construction management degrees https://www.reddit.com/r/ConstructionManagers/s/KaaUV50sg4
Or do you have a universally recognised or nationally accepted health and safety qualification where you are? You could train in that. Transferable skills and a transferable job.
Don’t be sorry Thankyou for all the responses. I could study for something like a cert or specificf it actually leads to anything or less than a year long. She’s is high income but not to that level. College is something I definitely have come to terms I’m not capable of and have tried multiple times just ended up spending almost 10k at community college and not a single credit attained as I couldn’t pass the placement courses
Im not familiar with where you are, and what’s available but could an apprenticeship be workable?
Health & Safety (OHS) exist in the U.S., offering "earn while you learn" models, often combining practical work as safety assistants with part-time college courses (like at Edmonds College) leading to certifications or degrees, supported by federal programs via Apprenticeship.gov and industry leaders like Lockheed Martin, focusing on real-world experience in identifying hazards and ensuring compliance.
Because its hands on its not just sitting and listening to people speak, you understand it in real life application.
What about something that involves an academy where you’re still getting paid like police, TSA, correctional, etc.?
for the bots as well as hiring managers, be shorter and more specific in your descriptions. mention measurable accomplishments. also, make sure you run what you write through grammarly, or a similar app. There are loads of grammar mistakes and broken sentences in that resume. doesn't give a good first impression. as far as how you beat the resume algorithms when applying, you have to adjust your resume for different types of positions. there are certain keywords that the bots are looking for when filtering through initial application piles. what those keywords are may vary from position to position, but a safe bet is many of them will be in the job listing itself.
Go over to /r/jobs discord and join the #reume-advice channel.
Any volunteer work you can add? Any clubs or such you were in for school?
Never volunteered and only club was snowboarding :/
You might be good to include the snowboarding. It at least shows you were kind of outgoing and you might see someone who likes that kind of thing. You could also fancy it up with things like "Helped organize meeting times." ext. You sure you never volunteered? Like not even moving the chairs at a school or church event?
Will do and honestly never not even that or at least anything I remember
Well if you are between jobs it might be a good time to start. If you go early it will help keep you in the habit of rising early like you do when you are employed. Also you never know who you'll meet. Myretired uncle was volunteering at a school and made friend with a guys who son had a business that needed folks. He called me and I was working a great job there the next day.
Edit: I was a 17 with no experience at the time and ended up making more than the national average at the time. It totally changed my life.
DOJ must have redacted this one
Took me a second but 😂😂
I'd personally bullet point alot of your duties, and try to emphasize accomplishments in your roles rather than what the role entailed. For example, in your sales associate role if you closed xx amount of sales or increased sales by a percentage i'd list that instead of just saying "demonstrated product knowledge to increase sales" that doesnt really tell me anything.
Some easy fixes here:
Summary: Skip what you have here. A few bullets about what you’ve accomplished can be great if it’s specific to the job/industry you’re applying for. Otherwise leave it out. This should highlight top relevant work experience.
Work experience: Divide these into bullets before applying to any more jobs. People are sorting through a lot of applications and they won’t like walls of text. 2-5 bullets for each job that is relevant to what job you’re applying for.
Education: Take off when you graduated.
Skills: Remove things like friendly disposition, physically fit, great work ethic, etc. Most of this can be apparent in an interview or the lines of your resume. Stick to hard skills that you have that are in the job description. If they want someone with labeling experience for example and you have it, then put that down.
Harder fix:
It sounds like you would do well with some career exploration. What interests you? What in past roles has energized you vs. drained you? I think you’re ripe for a good reflection on potential paths.
Your resume read very “operations” to me. So that’s a potential fit. If you’re looking for ideas, pop open ChatGPT and tell it what roles you’ve had, what you liked or disliked in each job, and then perhaps add some career tests like the MBTI or enneagram.
Got a fair amount of work ahead of you but you can do it!
Physically fit, Physically fit
Physically Physically Physically
Paraphrase your skill list, and maybe write down years of experience in those skills as well.
i will agree with some of these other comments that the more you shorten and concise your resume, the more views it’ll get. i noticed when i took out all unnecessary information, i started getting more call backs. it’s not perfect, but it has improved my chances.
Tbh condense the Wawa
Some of the skills listed aren't really skills. They're just starting that you ate willing to do certain things. Skills are things you actually have experience in that is actually related to a job like type 60 wpm or certified forklift operator, knowledge of hand tools, etc.
Some excellent advice here. You can upload your resume along with the best advice on streamlining the resume, upload to ChatGPT ask for 3 variations. Look them over, choose one, and adjust the language to feel like your voice. Maybe do it more than once. Try again with a job description. ChatGpT is not a silver bullet but it can help. Just use the free account and save all the responses because the free version doesn’t save your work or results. Hope this helps.
Get a job at Costco. You start part time at $20 an hour but if you work hard don’t be tardy and be reliable you can be a supervisor in a year to a year in a half making 34 an hour.
Summary: I'm actually okay with you saying authorized to work for any US (not requiring sponsorship). That said, I'd only state that if your work history suggests you're a non-citizen or education is from another country. If you have a foreign name, change the first name to American/white name. Typically the summary is good for career changes and rarely used. You really only need Education and Work Experience at minimum.
Work Experience: write out bullets not a bunch of sentences to form a paragraph. That's how a resume is written. Let's assume you've written the experience in bullet format rather than a paragraph - the bullets are written like a job description (telling me what you did). A resume showcases you meet the minimum qualifications. HERE is how you write a good bullet. Tl;dr?
1) what did you do
2) how did you do it (tools, resources)
3) impact/result
3-5 bullets per role.
Education: don't put years on your grad dates unless it's < 5 years to mitigate age bias; remove the HS diploma and keep the college graduation stuff
Skills: I'd scrap it completely. Why? It's better to show how you applied these skills (in your bullets) instead of making a list. What do you think would be more impactful? Telling someone how you're proficient in Microsoft Office or telling them you used Excel to do X, Y, Z, and presented them to management and advise them on blah blah blah? The latter IMO.
Your resume should be job title specific. So if you're applying for formulation technicians (for example), your resume should be tailored to that job title. Look up 10-15 of the job title you want and then see what the common keywords / qualifications are asked and make sure you reference them in your bullets.
Apply early - first 100. Ideally first 50 applicants.
I don't agree with some of the commenter's advice. My $0.02 is based on what worked for me (and others I've advised) to get screenings w/ relative ease cold applying to remote senior accounting roles when I was laid off a while back.
Can you travel?
Unable to tied down within 25 miles Warren county area
Shouldn't you have been making $35-$40/hr as a pest control tech after 8 years?
Were you trained and licensed to apply all classes of pesticide?
I wish I attempted 9 times to move to any other position in the 8 years there. I used to have a 7A, 7B, 13. Trained about 30+ Techs (most who moved up past me or left to better), and also did sanitation/cleaning on top of the normal pest duties. Left at 23.50. They offered me to come back at 23 but stated I probably would still stay a tech.
Redo the whole thing, also lie to make your resume more cohesive for the role you're applying for. You need to get targeted.
I didn’t do this BUT the operator job I’m currently in did look at my exaggerated constriction experience and granted I need the money it’s also why I’m in a position of cluelessness where I am I know I’m not mechanically inclined but kinda put me in a position of just getting fired again unless I magically become a machine mechanic wiz in the next month
Is it a "you" problem? are companies actually hiring?
Only advice is to delete some of the generic talking points at the bottom then make the blobs of text that describe what you did at each job into bullet points.
I think a ME problem taking in consideration how all my peers are so far ahead job wise and how long it took to get a a first time small win. Plus the hiring crisis amping it up.
Ask ChatGPT to reformat it and make it more concise