It’s my first level and it’s going to be around hard demon (probably gonna nerf/ buff parts later). I feel like the decoration is missing something but I don’t know what. It’s terraria inspired.
Since nobody will give more than one word, allow me to give a more detailed response.
I think the beginning is a bit too straightfly-heavy. If you want to make fun ship gameplay, especially in slow speed, you should try to vary the overall gameplay so it doesn’t get boring having to do the same repetitive stuff every attempt. Look at a level like The Cellar Path’s slow ship gameplay, and try to implement it in a way that works for what YOU want to do. Also, add some kind of foreground and background so it doesn’t look weird all being on two layers-make them move with a parallax so it looks smoother.
The cube gameplay looks kinda fun tbh, but it looks very orb-heavy. Try to vary the jumps so more of them happen off of actual platforms rather than just clicking in a strange pattern.
Feel free to interpret my feedback in however you want, as this is not all required, but stuff that would probably make your level more interesting. In the end, it’s all up to you what you want to do for that level :)
Maybe take advantage of how the corruption got such pits to make some big sways Up and down, like go all the way Up, then a bit of straight fly, then down, or add in some of these plant spikes to make more diagonal sections where you Bounce on some orbs
The pixel art of the mobs looks incredible. The block design could use more variation though. I’d suggest playing around with layering different objects and changing their colors till you get something that looks good, then do it a couple more times so you can have more variation. I’d also suggest layering structures a bit like I did here.
And one more thing, the darkness I think is just a bit too much in the beginning, so I would make the gradient just a bit bigger so you can see a bit more gameplay ahead.
You don’t need to do all of this btw, it’s your level not mine. Hopefully you found something here useful though
When theres six seconds left on the video, I feel like it should go faster undeeground,
have less, or be further away. You get too close to it. Also that invisible teleport portals are weird
Chill with the straight flies, it gets tedious and you can do far more with the ship.
Colour scheme is good and I'm assuming you'll vary the deco so all good on that front. Could stand out a bit more tho, it looks quite faded and bland and this could be a huge problem if/when you make your backgrounds.
I'd rant about sightreadability but this is way beyond the difficulty where it's strictly necessary.
this is sick, but i feel like the level could go for some better details and lighting. i know it’s terraria and all, but this looks like a star rate rather than a feature.
Ok but for real though, the part looks a little empty, try adding details in the cave bg. Also using a default bg can end up making the part feel a little empty as well.
Basically just background problems. Try adding more details
It needs air deco and maybe some moving things like rabbits, slimes, butterflies, particles, really just stuff to fill the space. Don't overdo it with glow and tons of other stuff, just a bit to fill some space.
start is too repetitive, also you need more effects (but not too many) for it to be rate worthy. I would recommend less ship at the start and less straight fly.
Since nobody will give more than one word, allow me to give a more detailed response.
I think the beginning is a bit too straightfly-heavy. If you want to make fun ship gameplay, especially in slow speed, you should try to vary the overall gameplay so it doesn’t get boring having to do the same repetitive stuff every attempt. Look at a level like The Cellar Path’s slow ship gameplay, and try to implement it in a way that works for what YOU want to do. Also, add some kind of foreground and background so it doesn’t look weird all being on two layers-make them move with a parallax so it looks smoother.
The cube gameplay looks kinda fun tbh, but it looks very orb-heavy. Try to vary the jumps so more of them happen off of actual platforms rather than just clicking in a strange pattern.
Feel free to interpret my feedback in however you want, as this is not all required, but stuff that would probably make your level more interesting. In the end, it’s all up to you what you want to do for that level :)
thanks for the feedback. i appreciate it :)
Maybe take advantage of how the corruption got such pits to make some big sways Up and down, like go all the way Up, then a bit of straight fly, then down, or add in some of these plant spikes to make more diagonal sections where you Bounce on some orbs
Terra-rific
your level is corrupted, take this.
https://preview.redd.it/00hn1czdg96g1.jpeg?width=360&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3ddb1a4a3cfb6116185d7608815f6ac5ae4a0997
nice
gud
peak
Good but just a little bland
I like how the song sounds like it would be 55 minutes long
Either 55 minutes or 55 seconds
The pixel art of the mobs looks incredible. The block design could use more variation though. I’d suggest playing around with layering different objects and changing their colors till you get something that looks good, then do it a couple more times so you can have more variation. I’d also suggest layering structures a bit like I did here.
https://preview.redd.it/b55ono8e0a6g1.jpeg?width=2436&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0eca411126ae9bccf495be85805747ef1b6e60ee
And one more thing, the darkness I think is just a bit too much in the beginning, so I would make the gradient just a bit bigger so you can see a bit more gameplay ahead.
You don’t need to do all of this btw, it’s your level not mine. Hopefully you found something here useful though
Terraria is so good
i love
cool
ship is insane demon, but it looks really cool!
I love this
When theres six seconds left on the video, I feel like it should go faster undeeground, have less, or be further away. You get too close to it. Also that invisible teleport portals are weird
It’s good but I don’t think anybody’s going to download a 75mb song for a 1-2 minute level
Chill with the straight flies, it gets tedious and you can do far more with the ship.
Colour scheme is good and I'm assuming you'll vary the deco so all good on that front. Could stand out a bit more tho, it looks quite faded and bland and this could be a huge problem if/when you make your backgrounds.
I'd rant about sightreadability but this is way beyond the difficulty where it's strictly necessary.
YAY MY WORM SCARF IS WARDING
this is sick, but i feel like the level could go for some better details and lighting. i know it’s terraria and all, but this looks like a star rate rather than a feature.
AMAZING level, just a wee bit bland.
i love the art!
The beginning is not that good but the rest is, I love terraria!
Maybe when the music cuts out at the beginning the player could disapear
am I MISSING something? How is this not getting more praise, it's so cool
The Angel used (peak)
Ok but for real though, the part looks a little empty, try adding details in the cave bg. Also using a default bg can end up making the part feel a little empty as well.
Basically just background problems. Try adding more details
Use the Terraria spikes rather than generic. Same with other textures.
TERRARIA!?
Which is the song name or the level that uses this song? I'm pretty sure is exasperation right?
It’s The Angel, the song used for Eon
Oh yeah you're right thank you
You could use the glowy parts of the corruption like the shadow orbs in the first part for glow and to add more detail
It needs air deco and maybe some moving things like rabbits, slimes, butterflies, particles, really just stuff to fill the space. Don't overdo it with glow and tons of other stuff, just a bit to fill some space.
start is too repetitive, also you need more effects (but not too many) for it to be rate worthy. I would recommend less ship at the start and less straight fly.
I will be playing this level when it drops, but crimson is superior.
Real
https://preview.redd.it/zi54ovappa6g1.jpeg?width=252&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4abfeffd13da6799244f73bf24f750dd58b2f9ba
it uses the 2.2 pixel designs, instant feature
Maybe you should make some sort of boss fight at the end with the eater of worlds
Song name?
https://preview.redd.it/etp508h2ve6g1.jpeg?width=320&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=47b27ac586823401d7ea9b8684c60c866fee0035
one piece of advice i can give you, recreate the background from terraria in the corruption because the built in backgrounds are absolute dogwater