Hi all, I'm working on a character and hope to get some feedback. So the idea for this character is an alternate version of Snow White.

So this is what I have for her backstory. When she was young, the Evil Queen (placeholder), her mother, attempted to sacrifice Snow in an effort to extend her life. However, the ritual had gone wrong and left Snow in the forest half dead. Her hair turned from a glossy black to a radiant silver, where she gets her name.

She was found by a group of dwarves who took her back to their mine and nursed her back to health. Over time, the dwarves become her family, and she helps out in the mine. But soon her size became a problem, prompting her and her family to create a house for her next to theirs. She grows to 6,2 tall.

Because she's grown up with dwarves, she developed a tolerance to alcohol and can drink most people under the table. She can also tell a fake gem from a real one, due to her work in the mine. While she is a gentle giant, she doesn't have that much of a filter for bad language.

She left the dwarves' home after an accident that killed one of them. Feeling responsible and rejected, she took one of her father's axes and her own personal collection of gems before running. Unaware that the accident wasn't her fault.

Setting out on an adventure to find herself, she comes across as a little naive due to her friendly personality and lack of contact with the outside world. While she may be unaware of how the outside world works, she is a quick learner.

She is mostly cool-tempered, cheerful, and hard to anger. But when she does get angry, the dwarven-made axe on her back is not for show.

Images are for reference as to what she looks like. But for the most part, how does this outline sound? Is there anything that doesn't make sense? Is there anything that you could add?