You can read the first three chapters in this doc: https://docs.google.com/document/u/2/d/1fVpJkL9YWb_BXLL4Br2uOmqds_s7cI1nRAAAGxOxrhs/mobilebasic?pli=1

I have a plot in mind, but just wondering--what do you think of the first few chapters? I've posted about this story before and In still working on it after months of art block (in all areas of art😭) and have promised a lot of people I drop the book for them once I'm finished, but it's taking foreverrrrrr. Please just give me some critique on how to imrpice and if u like, you can tell me what you think about the char-cters that have been introduced. I just want you guys' opinion.

Pls be respectful.

Tysm!