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I'm not the most experienced artist ever (I draw with Bob Ross) but I don't see anything "wrong" with it. It might just be that you've been looking at it for too long and so you think it looks bad.
I was gonna say the opposite the eyes are off angle with the 3/4 profile he's using for the head. Her right eye ( our left) is almost at a full front ( portrait ) angle. While the her left eye ( our right) is about at the right description for the 3/4 look
Also, shading will help it look right, I think the jaw line and the bottom up perspective seem ok. Things could be worked on for sure but for what it is, you are doing very well!
Her left eye seems too small for the short distance away it is from her right eye. There will be a negligible difference in eye sizes for that angle and distance.
If it was my drawing i will try to serapate just a little bit more the eyes, specifically the right one, it doesn't seems weird but maybe it will look better
Try making her left upper forehead/scalp smaller and have it recede at a sharper angle. As others stated, too much of the left side of her face is showing. If you look at some 3/4 face references that should help. It’s a good drawing overall, just needs some tweaks!
From what i can tell, angle is very close to the reference picture you included, making the face too narrow. Heres your drawing as a multiply layer over the ref picture, you can see the differences. Our left side lines up pretty well, but the right side not as much
The eyebrow should go over the side of her head (the one furthest away, blocked by nose.) it just stops in the middle of her eye, rather than cupping over it
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I'm not the most experienced artist ever (I draw with Bob Ross) but I don't see anything "wrong" with it. It might just be that you've been looking at it for too long and so you think it looks bad.
I agree. This is likely just because of over exposure. Step away, come back, add some color, and see if you still don’t like
the eyes are too long, the eye thats further back is in the wrong perspective.
Cranium could use some expanding, and i think you could shift the eyes farther apart.
did everything except this 😭 thank you so muchh
I was gonna say the opposite the eyes are off angle with the 3/4 profile he's using for the head. Her right eye ( our left) is almost at a full front ( portrait ) angle. While the her left eye ( our right) is about at the right description for the 3/4 look
Also, shading will help it look right, I think the jaw line and the bottom up perspective seem ok. Things could be worked on for sure but for what it is, you are doing very well!
https://preview.redd.it/1liuyh8n7s8g1.jpeg?width=2592&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f7d9210a09f9340aaa8ba976df15096e30a1c608
What about now
Yeah, bolding the lines definitely made it look more right with the angle! Awesome 👍
Yaeyy thanks!!
Her left eye seems too small for the short distance away it is from her right eye. There will be a negligible difference in eye sizes for that angle and distance.
The knuckles of her hand are also slightly off
https://preview.redd.it/g28foujz6s8g1.jpeg?width=4608&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=d0255a0ae790a56b50510133d1251b55bb643bbb
Better now?
Ah, you changed the eye spacing.
That small change made a significant difference to the feel, for sure
But the real question is: How do YOU feel now? Does the image still feel off?
https://preview.redd.it/apmrdqixfs8g1.jpeg?width=4608&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f54a91b9fb20156523485cf1c574e4eafd403749
Not anymore after coloring too, how does it look?
Looking great! 👌🏻
The hand is misshapen, use a reference :)
I fixed it :)) hands are worst thing to draw 💔
Most of the left side of the face shouldn’t be visible at this angle. As of now, she weirdly looks like she is facing forward but also sideways.
I like it . Looks cute . I dont see "long eyes" or whatever .
Hmm maybe the far eye is a little bit too small?
lucy has bold upper eyelashes, the ones your drew are really thin
It's rough sketch for now I'll make them more bold tho I am not good at drawing lashes
If it was my drawing i will try to serapate just a little bit more the eyes, specifically the right one, it doesn't seems weird but maybe it will look better
Try making her left upper forehead/scalp smaller and have it recede at a sharper angle. As others stated, too much of the left side of her face is showing. If you look at some 3/4 face references that should help. It’s a good drawing overall, just needs some tweaks!
https://preview.redd.it/c1wxcr40cs8g1.jpeg?width=1077&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b75e13f038c0fa6296246d128a81a65085dde036
From what i can tell, angle is very close to the reference picture you included, making the face too narrow. Heres your drawing as a multiply layer over the ref picture, you can see the differences. Our left side lines up pretty well, but the right side not as much
I'll fix that :D thank you!!!
https://preview.redd.it/pme9y03ags8g1.jpeg?width=4608&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=38ff77be0612dee65c7632f20b7560d2a14d1178
Does it look good now
The eyebrow should go over the side of her head (the one furthest away, blocked by nose.) it just stops in the middle of her eye, rather than cupping over it