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Excellent pencil work mate. Clean lines, good use of framing and flowing story and action.
This "whole page" approach is far superior to pinup and cover poses. You use them well.
Brilliant, mate. Keep working on it.
IM humble O, I would switch panels 1 & 2 and remove panel 3 for a smooth flow. Todd McFarlane always said “why draw multiple panels when one dynamic panel can move the story. “
Hey srry for the late reply, i was trying to say remove the panel where Batman is grabbing with both hands. Always keep the glide, that’s his appeal.
Your work is great btw. I admire your ability to compose & actually complete a page.
I'm not OP. I agree with the glide. I think the panel with Batman's back to the reader can be removed - it doesn't show anything. The panel with Batman grabbing the vent shows action, just like in the Arkham games, which is what OP seems to be going for here.
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Nicely done. I like that you're doing whole pages instead of "pin ups." Sound storytelling!
Thanks! Yeah I’m trying to do a page a day now that I have some time off of work. See if I can finish it within the week.
Excellent pencil work mate. Clean lines, good use of framing and flowing story and action. This "whole page" approach is far superior to pinup and cover poses. You use them well. Brilliant, mate. Keep working on it.
Ah thanks man! :)
damn so cool 🔥🔥
Thank you!
I love it! I would buy your comics.
Thank you so much!
I love your drawing style, but you still a lot to learn about storytelling. Try read more comics to understand panels.
Thanks for reacting. Could you be more specific? Love to hear what I can change.
Love the shade
IM humble O, I would switch panels 1 & 2 and remove panel 3 for a smooth flow. Todd McFarlane always said “why draw multiple panels when one dynamic panel can move the story. “
You would switch batman gliding down with him landing? So he would land first then glide?
Must have meant switching panels 3 and 4, or removing 4 altogether. Panel 4 is the one that's unnecessary.
Hey srry for the late reply, i was trying to say remove the panel where Batman is grabbing with both hands. Always keep the glide, that’s his appeal. Your work is great btw. I admire your ability to compose & actually complete a page.
I'm not OP. I agree with the glide. I think the panel with Batman's back to the reader can be removed - it doesn't show anything. The panel with Batman grabbing the vent shows action, just like in the Arkham games, which is what OP seems to be going for here.
Thanks for the feedback! I guess you meant removing page 1 as well ? Because switching 1 and 2 wouldn’t make sense chronologically.