Saw this one first, thought the joke was that since he only transported back a few seconds he was in the same spot and exploded himself. Looked at the original and it seems like It was the same joke just without the paradox part. Idk why ppl are saying its incomprehensible
I didn’t understand the amputation at all until seeing the original. At best I thought so is this like teleportation where teleporting would need to kill your physical self at the origin and reconstruct you at the destination?
You made the main joke the fact that going back a few seconds means you will appear in the same spot.
The original has this joke but also the joke that only going back a few seconds is what caused the paradox, which makes the panel of the warning about the paradox earn its place too.
I thought about this. Earth also moves through space, the milky way moves through space. Depending on your reference point, it would land you very far away.
These are just the concessions we make for stories to make sense. It's called willing suspension of disbelief.
It's a good amputation for sure, could maybe use the "You'll cause a paradox" panel, but I feel like there's enough pop culture knowledge to get it if you think about it for a sec (if that long)
Love me a good telefrag
This guy DOOMs.
im not making a twitter account just post this shit here
Here: https://www.reddit.com/r/comics/s/z28t1sNrYr
OOP hasn't watched enough time travel movies
Saw this one first, thought the joke was that since he only transported back a few seconds he was in the same spot and exploded himself. Looked at the original and it seems like It was the same joke just without the paradox part. Idk why ppl are saying its incomprehensible
I think this is WAY better than the original, congrats OP
Great job doc
Its great! Dont mind people who need handholding, the joke is super clear, although the punchline has changed, the original paradox one is implied.
I actually think this is a very successful cosmetic surgery
the original is better
I didn’t understand the amputation at all until seeing the original. At best I thought so is this like teleportation where teleporting would need to kill your physical self at the origin and reconstruct you at the destination?
Operation successful, nice job
The original is fine.
You made the main joke the fact that going back a few seconds means you will appear in the same spot.
The original has this joke but also the joke that only going back a few seconds is what caused the paradox, which makes the panel of the warning about the paradox earn its place too.
Earth rotates, so going back a few seconds will land you quite far away from original location.
I thought about this. Earth also moves through space, the milky way moves through space. Depending on your reference point, it would land you very far away.
These are just the concessions we make for stories to make sense. It's called willing suspension of disbelief.
It's a good amputation for sure, could maybe use the "You'll cause a paradox" panel, but I feel like there's enough pop culture knowledge to get it if you think about it for a sec (if that long)
This definitely changes the joke. As a fan of this guy’s fucked up sense of humor, I gotta be a purist and side with the original.
ehh liked the other one better
The original was perfectly fine as is, but you did manage to make a fun little absurd comic.
The joke is different from the original, but it's also a good joke.
This version is much better.
Yeah, this one's not working for me
It doesn't make sense without the original panels
I understood it before looking at the original
It’s really confusing I thought he turned into a ghost before seeing the original
Fucking incomprehensible
You botched this one doc
sorry this one doesnt make sense
Its a comedy transformation, its a different albeit funnier joke now