Animation I’m submitting in my post secondary portfolio, can I get some feedback?
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  • 1 points CoolCarsNGaming

    Okay, this is awesome, please more of this little juice box looking fella

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    1 points SumpreTheDuck87

    LMAOO it’s supposed to be a hard drive but I appreciate it!

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  • 1 points Cornonthory

    Oh my gosh I’m doing the same thing

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    1 points SumpreTheDuck87

    Oh really? Have you finished your animation, how about the other stuff?

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  • 1 points Logical-Patience-397

    The arc of it falling feels a bit too even. It should rise when it jumps at one speed, hang in the air, then fall much faster. Easing in and out of the speed.

    The squash and stretch drawings look nice! The frames can probably all stay, it's only their timing that needs to change.

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    1 points SumpreTheDuck87

    Appreciate the feedback, I’ll change it up a bit

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  • 1 points JulienBrightside

    I really like how you squeeze, bend and stretch.

    I don't really feel any impact upon hitting the ground. Maybe that can be improved.

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    1 points SumpreTheDuck87

    You have any suggestions how I can add impact on the landing?

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    1 points JulienBrightside

    Squeeze the box even more
    have the screen shake (if it is really heavy)
    have a small dust cloud at the bottom
    deform the circle?

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    1 points SumpreTheDuck87

    I see, I could do that thank you!

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