Uhh... thats about it, I have not posted this on other platforms outside of my soundcloud and newgrounds, but do plan to release it on spotify maybe, idk....

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  • Thing to look at:

    The melody progression is a bit all over the place. Find an identity for it.

    The reverb and general overprocessing all over the song is an interesting choice. I get the vibe you are going for but as it is it's just way too much. Keep it in the intro and remove it for the "drop".

    If you send me the project as a zipped loop package I can show you an example of how to make this really good!

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    Thanks for the feedback, this was a fairly older song of mine, so I probably wont back in to improve it (I rarely do that for my songs, unfortunately, or fortunately, idk)...

    It was either this, or my first "release" "The Missile Knows", but tbh I'm not sure about "The Missile Knows", so i shared this instead. If you want to listen to The Missile Knows its on spotify, soundcloud, yt music, etc, my username on those platforms is *popgoesme700*, instead of 701...

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