Something that’s 16-32 measures to give it more of a “story” if that makes sense. Could go for a little bit more dynamic-ness (realest word ever). The acoustic steel is a little jarring toward the middle. Maybe EQ out whichever frequencies are making it that way and/or adjust volume on it.
I get the sense you’re closer to a beginner. If that’s the case, you’re doing great and I say keep trucking along. If you’re not a beginner, sorry if that sounded rude lol. Either way, keep at it, even if you ever feel discouraged. It’s crazy how much you can forget if you don’t stay consistent.
The Mixdown is bit rough. But since you are a beginner this is something you will keep improving.
The vibe of the track is trough the roof. Melody is catchy and gets my head bouncing instantly.
I say its perfect for what it is.
Something you could try is to change the melody for the second drop. Right now its a bit repetitive since you use the same melody pretty much for every second of the track. If you decide to change the melody make sure you also change the bassline. Try to get bit of variation going.
But if i was you i would take the learnings and try to do it better with the next project.
I use to use the same patterns on different instruments which is completely normal starting out but the sooner you practice making different sections the better.
Something that’s 16-32 measures to give it more of a “story” if that makes sense. Could go for a little bit more dynamic-ness (realest word ever). The acoustic steel is a little jarring toward the middle. Maybe EQ out whichever frequencies are making it that way and/or adjust volume on it.
I get the sense you’re closer to a beginner. If that’s the case, you’re doing great and I say keep trucking along. If you’re not a beginner, sorry if that sounded rude lol. Either way, keep at it, even if you ever feel discouraged. It’s crazy how much you can forget if you don’t stay consistent.
The Mixdown is bit rough. But since you are a beginner this is something you will keep improving.
The vibe of the track is trough the roof. Melody is catchy and gets my head bouncing instantly.
I say its perfect for what it is.
Something you could try is to change the melody for the second drop. Right now its a bit repetitive since you use the same melody pretty much for every second of the track. If you decide to change the melody make sure you also change the bassline. Try to get bit of variation going.
But if i was you i would take the learnings and try to do it better with the next project.
Right before the beat comes in all the way add the original “deez nuts” sound fx leading into it
I use to use the same patterns on different instruments which is completely normal starting out but the sooner you practice making different sections the better.
Here this helped me https://youtu.be/SDJwg1JoPtY?si=36QLt1uPYtobrrXj
You're just ganna have to go for it the same way you made this first section. Let your idea transform into a new one.