In 杯 your 不 is trying to escape from the 木

In general your proportions aren't great

I recommend getting a grid notebook (like the normal ones kids use for math) and writing every character on 4 squares (2x2)

I think you should practice your stroke order and proportions. Some of the strokes are kind of off. When you wrote 钱, that left part is curved, when it's not supposed to be.

http://www.strokeorder.info/

You could use that website to practice your skills. Enter a character and see the order in which the strokes are written, as well as how big each component is. It's kind of a pain in the beginning, but it'll pay off so much, I promise.

Best of luck!

Why are your radicals escaping /hj

I'd recommend using graph paper to make sure your characters are all as wide as they are tall.

Try to keep character components closer together, your 谁 especially is all over the place 

print a 田字格 sheet on paper and try to write every character in the box

Your notebook actually looks pretty solid and honestly way more organized than mine was when I started. What helped me a lot was grouping words by how they sound and how they behave in sentences instead of just writing long lists. Getting pinyin and tones really locked in early made a huge difference for me and this page helped clear up a lot of confusion https://www.lingoclass.co.uk/learn-chinese-pronunciation-pinyin

Once pronunciation started to click the characters felt less random and easier to remember. I still write them out but I always say them out loud at the same time and it makes them stick way better and also makes speaking less scary later

O que funcionou pra mim estudando: Eu armazenava os caracteres em um aplicativo de flashcard (se não sabe o que é, da uma pesquisada em flashcards). Depois, eu escrevia a mão, só o caracteres, várias vezes, pra aprender a ordem que se escreve o caractere, o formato, e fixar o significado. Depois eu revisava a escrita dos caracteres que eu sentia que não tinha fixado. Leitura é bom pra isso também.

Try to find a Hanzi copy practice book 练字簿

Don't just start dissecting the character according to your own aesthetic taste, or you will make a lot of them marginally illegible.

先认识笔画，再认识基本的字，然后逐渐积累，在积累的过程中能认识到词语成语还有句子

Your hanzi structure has quite a few issues, with one character splitting into two.

Acho que o principal, primeiro, é entender que os caracteres precisam ter uma proporção, todo eles cabem dentro de quadrados. Você pode imprimir folhas quadriculadas ou se preferir comprar em papelaria (eu mesmo comecei com aqueles blocos de papéis quadriculados), mas é um bom começo!! Bons estudos :-)

写得很好 加油...谢谢对中文的喜欢