Hallo zusammen,

ich schreibe derzeit an einem Roman und suche 2-3 weibliche Testleserinnen, die bereit wären, die Anfangskapitel sukzessive zu lesen und mir ehrliches Feedback zu geben.

Es geht um die Filmindustrie in Hollywood, Liebe hinter den Kulisse… aber auch ernste Themen werden angesprochen.

Es geht mir vor allem um:

– Stimmung und emotionale Wirkung

– Figurenbeziehung und Nähe

– Lesefluss und Authentizität

Ich würde die Kapitel schrittweise teilen (nicht das gesamte Manuskript auf einmal) und nach jedem Abschnitt ein paar gezielte Fragen stellen.

Das Ganze soll vollständig anonym bleiben – ich teile den Text über ein privates Google-Dokument mit Kommentarfunktion.

Wenn du Lust hast, mich dabei zu unterstützen, freue ich mich über einen kurzen Kommentar oder eine private Nachricht.

Vielen Dank 🤍

  • Hi OP,

    This is a friendly mod note to caution you against bait-and-switch messages. If anyone DMs you offering to help and suddenly asks for payment or donations or your personal information, or asks you to click suspicious links, please report them to us with proof via modmail, because this is a 100% volunteer (free) beta reader subreddit only.

    No services (including art or book covers) or any form of payment after giving a “free sample” is allowed in the subreddit or to our posters via DMs. AI-generated feedback and “reviews” is also not allowed.

    It may take a week or longer before someone comments on your post. Please try commenting with a link to your post in our pinned threads to have more luck matching with someone.

    And please consider blocking u/CuberoinkArmy and u/FrostyReader- and u/Electrical_Trip5997 and u/Hange_Zoe19 to prevent them from asking for money in DMs, or report their DM as spam or harassment to the admins immediately. We do not promote their paid services in any shape or form and our rules are fully against paid betas.

    Thank you!

    parent

  • Hey, ich arbeite teilweise in der Filmindustrie und lese gerne Romance. Ich würde gerne mal reinschauen. Hast du noch mehr Infos zum Plot?

    parent

  • Hi I'm interested. I'm a novice writer myself and have also written a romance novel set in Hollywood. DM if you'd like me to read your work.

    parent

  • Welcome to r/BetaReaders! Please ensure your post has not been caught in Reddit's spam filters by following these instructions.

    One of the best ways to connect with a beta is to swap manuscripts with another author: click here to view other Romance submissions in the Short Story category (or simply search the sub based on your preferences or browse until something catches your eye).

    If you haven’t already, we strongly encourage you include in your post:

    • A story blurb and any content warnings
    • The type of feedback you’re looking for and your preferred timeline
    • Your critique swap availability

    Also, consider commenting in the First Pages thread to give your beta request additional visibility and checking the Able to Beta thread for beta readers who are interested in manuscripts like yours.

    If you have any questions, please take a look at our FAQs for additional resources on how to work with beta readers (and other authors) to get the most out of a critique, or feel free to start a discussion using the [Discussion] tag.

    I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please contact the moderators of this subreddit if you have any questions or concerns.

    parent