Hey guys, I’m looking for preferably 2-3 beta readers for my first ever fully completed novel. It’s an epic fantasy, with loads of political and military elements. There are some small mentions of magic, but in doesn’t show up in the actual book (I am planning for it to be a series where magic definitely will come up, though).

Blurb: Prince Arshan is the sole child of His Royal Majesty, King Silas of Halbon - feared across the world. In any other nation, Arshan's path to the throne would be clear. But in Halbon, blood alone is not enough to wear a crown. In Halbon, the strongest take the throne, and the weak kneel or die. When the King calls on Arshan to wage war against Halbon's southern enemies, Arshan eagerly answers. But one small mistake could cost the prince his entire future. Will he have what it takes to command armies, force surrenders, and cement his place as his father's heir?

Preferable timeline: Around three weeks or so.

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  • I am part of a writer's group that helps fantasy writers in the developmental, line edit and beta reading phase of books. We've been around for 6 months and helped one author publish his work and are always looking for folks to get in our reading groups. Your book's word count is right there with the rest of us, so you might find a good place if you're wanting some committed eyes!

    That sounds great! Where can I join?

    Throw me a DM, I would like to see what your long-term goals are for your book, and it's better to know what you're after so I am not over-selling what we offer. We typically handle developmental reviews, long-term beta reading and line editing. You'd be reading others books as well as part of a group and its a round-robin format!

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