Hello I am looking for beta readers to give feedback on the plot, characters, and overall story of my novel, Swords, Spells, and Sandwiches. This would be my debut novel that I have been developing for two years at this point. It draws from both the LitRPG and cozy fantasy subgenres, and is relatively low stakes. This book is intended to work either as a standalone or an introduction to a series or a broader world.
Blurb:
Being a regular guy in a world full of sword and sorcery, Kevin has always dreamed of becoming an adventurer. After saving his workplace from the wrath of a raging barbarian, Kevin realizes he has what it takes to become a monk, a master of martial arts and inner spirituality. Now, Kevin must learn to balance living his dream of being an adventurer with his day job at Falzon’s making sandwiches. However, Kevin realizes that being an adventurer isn't all fun when threats from both outside and within the city and adventuring hub of Call Port threaten his friends and his place of employment. Now, he must step up to protect what he holds dear.
This tale weaves the cozy work fantasy from Legends & Lattes with the kick ass bravado of Critical Role, building a tale of heroism and found family.
Other Comp Titles:
A Wizard's Guide to Defensive Baking, Can't Spell Treason Without Tea, Dungeon Crawler Carl, Jake's Magic Market
Target Audience:
New adult.
Content Warning:
Violence, crude language and humor.
What I'm looking for:
-A reader’s impression of the book.
-I would like to know how strong the prologue and first chapter are.
-The general stuff (plot, setting, the characters, the world, the fights including the dungeons, and the small moments of romance)
-Whether the humor lands or not.
-Feedback on the depiction of BIPOC/LGBTQ+ characters
-There are two epilogues. They are both intended to set up different stories. I would like to know which one provides a better set up and better conclusion to the story.
Please let me know if you are interested in reading a sample, or if you would like to do a full beta read. I am available to do any manuscript swaps, but please be aware that I am a slow reader.
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Hello! I’d be willing to do a beta swap for my slow burn rockstar romance.
For LitRPG authors, I’ve been reading Andrew Rowe’s series.
DM if interested!
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