Hi everyone! I'd love to find 1-2 additional beta readers to help me polish my manuscript up as much as possible. I think it's in pretty solid shape overall (I've had three wonderful beta readers and it's been through multiple rounds of editing/drafts), but I've made some edits based on their feedback and would love to run this draft by a new reader or two.

Here's the spoiler-free blurb, content warnings, and a link to my opening pages. Happy to send over the rest of Chapter 1 via DM to anyone who'd like to read a little more to see if you're interested.

Thank you all tons!!

Blurb:

Cynthia Rast loves her career as a seventh-grade history teacher. What she doesn’t love is living in constant fear that her students will be dragged from her classroom, never to be seen again. In Panterra, the magic that manifests in some children during adolescence is tantamount to a death sentence.

Haunted by her recent failure to save one of her students, Cynthia must make a decision about how far she’s willing to go to protect them. She allies herself with a network of adult mages from a hidden realm, led by a mysterious man named Damien who can’t seem to stay away from Cynthia any more than she can stay away from him. At the same time, a past relationship threatens to bring Cynthia into close proximity to a dangerous government leader who may hold the key to finding the abducted children.

As her life spins out of control, Cynthia is desperate to hold onto Damien, her friendships, and the career she holds sacred. But she soon learns that they’re all in more danger than she ever could have imagined, and that saving the people she loves will come at the steep cost of the only life she’s ever known.

Content Warnings:

  • Physical violence (including towards children)
  • Blood/gore
  • References to past emotional abuse (relationship)
  • Off-page references to deaths of children
  • Explicit sexual content (consensual)
  • Explicit language

Critique Swap Availability: I can commit to one beta swap with someone who's a good fit! If anyone wants to read just out of the kindness of their heart, that'd be amazing, too.

Link to Opening Pages: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ArYSkgNgh2Hy0B5hGUOBZ7eD2XcqfAL6mGBA8BXr3PQ/edit?usp=sharing

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  • Hello! I’d be willing to do a beta swap for my own slow burn rockstar romance.

    (Romantasy authors, I’ve been reading lately: SJM, Danielle L Jensen, Holly Black, Rebecca Yarros, JLA.)

    DM if interested!

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